Big Feet Pajamas Would Anyone Care To Critique Or Comment On This Poem?

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Big Girl


With his small hands
hardly understand the situation, "the entire command
Stretch and lace, with a total height;
Finally, we succeeded in opening the door
secretly in the hall,
every two and a half meters.
The stumbling block for wood floors
in his pajamas with feet,
Night terrors are waiting in the dark corridors
and stairs, but she is determined to
at this time not for himself.
After the last destination
Slides and slips, and each step
until it reaches the ground.
Attention to pursue their midnight adventure
Favorite blanket rear drag
Mixed coming from the kitchen
directly in the refrigerator
Milk and Cookies.
His loyal friend for consolation
all kinds of Boo Boo,
and a variety of issues on the agenda;
Mother had forgotten to
everything about their need for them
Hugs, and the time and the stories.
But they will be proud of tomorrow
it can provide for themselves;
Mom's "Big Girl tryin 'g need not
someone who is not there.